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Post by Next Generation on Oct 26, 2011 6:30:40 GMT -5
I believe this is my first ever one, im going to start making micros more 50/50 rather then all wrestling micros. This is still a WIP still gotta do the face and boots but other then that i think im dont unless you guys have any advice?
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Post by Diablo. on Oct 26, 2011 7:26:23 GMT -5
"My First Superhero"...
Sounds like some sort of product name for a line of superhero toys marketed for toddlers.
Anywho, not too bad, but the issue with making superheros like Superman is that since they have bland attires, all they really have is the template, and to execute a superhero micro well, you need a strong template, which you still lack at the moment. Regardless, not bad.
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 26, 2011 8:33:37 GMT -5
"My First Superhero"... Sounds like some sort of product name for a line of superhero toys marketed for toddlers. Anywho, not too bad, but the issue with making superheros like Superman is that since they have bland attires, all they really have is the template, and to execute a superhero micro well, you need a strong template, which you still lack at the moment. Regardless, not bad. Thanks for the feedback man.
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Post by andrew on Oct 26, 2011 15:21:14 GMT -5
Looks awesome so far dude. i actually think the temp is really cool. very unique for what i am use to seeing at least on other sites. Now finish it cause i want to see the final product lol
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Post by TC on Oct 26, 2011 15:54:37 GMT -5
Moved since it's a WIP.
Not bad, man. The nose area looks a bit odd. It also looks like it needs a bit more toning throughout the suit since he's a superhero though. But overall it's pretty good.
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Post by Alex on Oct 26, 2011 16:51:27 GMT -5
Not bad, shading throughout the body looks a bit flat though, seems the shading on the body temp is sparse. I would recommend adding highlights throughout the outfit to make it pop more. Also I'd make the cape come in more over the shoulders. Good start, keep working at it
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 26, 2011 22:17:37 GMT -5
Ok ill try finishing it sometime tomorrow and post it on here, thanks guys
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 27, 2011 22:15:24 GMT -5
Updated
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Post by andrew on Oct 28, 2011 13:52:34 GMT -5
I like how you did the abs, pretty sweet dude
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Post by AC on Oct 28, 2011 13:55:54 GMT -5
Nah but seriously, I'm not feeling it too much. The new one just looks odd and the shine looks more like he came and didn't clean up all the way I actually prefer the original one as I think the shading on the new one is too dark
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Post by Hurricane on Oct 28, 2011 18:20:16 GMT -5
Forehead is too small and the shine looks weird. Eye should always be exactly halfway up the head. Make the shine a bit darker. New nose is better. Shading is too dark, and is flat. You have the abs and lines down to signify muscles, but fill out areas with some shading to make it more 3D like rather than just having lines.
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