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Post by Next Generation on Oct 25, 2011 21:08:55 GMT -5
Winner gets a CW title shot on Smackdown Tyson Kidd v Trent Baretta Fast pace action, its a high flying delight from Trent Baretta as he nails move after move, Baretta throws Kidd outside the ring and goes to the top rope, Trent Baretta goes for a front flip onto Kidd but he misses as Kidd moves out of the way, Baretta lands back first onto the floor, Kidd goes into the ring and does a springboard crossbody onto Baretta. Both men get in the ring, Tyson Kidd hits the Code Blue but somehow Trent gets the foot on the rope. Tyson Kidd gets annoyed at this and picks him up and places him on the top turnbuckle, Kidd goes up and attempts a Superplex but Baretta counters with some right hands and then hits Tyson with a sunset flip from the top rope. Baretta gets the pinfall and will face Yoshi Tatsu for the Cruiserweight Championship on Smackdown.
Air Boom v Matt Striker and Johnny Curtis Stiker and Curtis cut a heel promo before the match about Airboom being overated and a bunch of baby kissing jerks. Air Boom come out firing and get the win after only 2 minutes. Air Boom celebrate but are beat down by Dibiase and Hennig. Dibiase and Hennig grab a mic and demand that they get a Tag Team contenders match next week on Raw. Main Event is Next. Big Show, Alex Riley and Goldust v Heath Slater, Curt Hawkins and Tyler Reks.
Big Show, Alex Riley and Goldust v Heath Slater, Curt Hawkins and Tyler Reks A-Ry and Hawkins start the bout, Riley hits the spine buster early and almost gets a sneaky pinfall. A-Ry tags in Goldust who goes on the attack, Goldust hits him with right hooks and positions Hawkins for the shattered dreams in the corner but the ref stops him, as Goldust goes over to Hawkins he gets his eyes raked, Hawkins tags Slater in and they hit a double suplex. Heath Slater dominates Goldust for a few minutes. Slater goes to the top rope but misses the moonsault on Goldust. Both men look to tag, Goldust tags Big Show in just as Slater tags in Reks, Big Show hits a few chops on Tyler Reks and then throws him out of the ring. Hawkins and Slater come in the ring and attack Big Show, they attempt a double suplex on the Giant but it fails, Big Show shoves them away with ease and he grabs the 2 men by the throat but before he could do the Double Chokeslam Tyler Reks comes back in the ring and hits Show with a big boot. Tyler Reks trys to lift Big Show for his finisher but cant. Big Show hits Reks with the KO punch, Show goes for the pin but Hawkins and Slater attack him once again but there interupted by Riley and Goldust who take Hawkins and Slater out to the floor, Tyler Reks gets up but Big Show chokeslams him and gets the 3. Big Show, A-Ry and Goldust celebrate in the ring to end the show.
Smackdown Preview Crusierweight Championship Match Yoshi Tatsu(c) v Trent Baretta
10 Man Battle Royal for the Vacant IC Title
WHC Number 1 contenders Match Randy Orton v Wade Barrett
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Post by TC on Oct 25, 2011 21:38:54 GMT -5
Just wanna say having a Superstars show can get frustrating. It's much easier to write Raw and Smackdown and forget about Superstars as it doesn't really lead to storylines and stuff, more or less just random matches.
But here's a better response to Raw:
-I don't like the random Superplex. Something should've led up to it rather than Santino just 'getting momentum.' I like Hennig and DiBiase teaming up though. -The Del Rio thing just made me say wtf. I don't get why he's come out to fight a jobber and just leave. -Too many finisher attempts in McIntyre vs Punk. -Ryan vs Cena is very random. He at least needs a good buildup as he's a nobody at this day in time and no one would care if he won. I mean, I know it's your fed thing, but that's just my opinion. Also, why would Cena get a chair if he just laid Ryan out with the AA? - 3 interferences is too much. The Ted one is okay since you're obviously signaling a tag team. But the way you brought Colt in was random. Edge's return should've been more epic than returning during a Mason Ryan match, LOL.
You need more matches. 4 matches really isn't enough for a show that's supposed to air for 2 hours. Also, more promos. Promos/cut scene-esqe things are what makes Diaries interesting.
I'll edit this with a Superstars response in a minute.
EDIT: Superstars
-Barreta push = #winning - Full promo should've been written out. The match needed some actual action rather than just saying he got the win after only 2 minutes. It didn't even tell a finish. -Random tag match? Lol. Pretty good match.
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 25, 2011 21:47:29 GMT -5
I agree with everything you have said, but there is a big storyline coming up around the whole Del Rio Leaving the arena which will start next Raw also i havnt started fresh i figured that i would start mid fued with a few rivalries, probably not the best idea but im trying to have the first ppv have meaning.
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Post by TC on Oct 25, 2011 21:54:20 GMT -5
It's best to start feuds your first few shows. That way people know what's going on from the start.
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 25, 2011 22:23:06 GMT -5
It's best to start feuds your first few shows. That way people know what's going on from the start. I know that but i rushed . I just typed Raw up, so ill post smackdown tonight or tomorrow morning
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Post by TC on Oct 25, 2011 22:30:50 GMT -5
If you'd check your PM's and reply, I could post my Raw tonight or tomorrow.
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 26, 2011 22:30:36 GMT -5
The show opens with the competitors for the battle royal coming to the ring.
10 Man Battle Royal IC Title Match Jindar Mahal v Justin Gabriel v Cody Rhodes v Brodus Clay v William Regal v Tyson Kidd v Ezekiel Jackson v Heath Slater v Kane v Mark Henry The match starts with everyone targeting Mark Henry and Brodus Clay, Henry and Clay knock everyone down and face off in the middle of the ring, both men hit eachother with punches, Henry gets the upperhand though, Henry irish whips Clay into the corner and hits a splash. The other competitors are all attacking eachother in the background. Mark Henry goes to clothesline Kane over the rope but Kane pulls the rope down and Henry gets eliminated. Mark Henry gets pissed off and comes back in the ring and lays Kane out with the worlds strongest slam. Brodus Clay throws Kane out and taunts him, as he is taunting Ezekiel Jackson lifts him over the rope, Now Kane, Brodus Clay and Mark Henry are eliminated. Mark Henry starts attacking Brodus Clay and hits Clay with the WSM onto the steel steps, after doing that he grabs Kane and hits the WSM on him through the announce table. Mark Henry finally leaves the arena after viciously attacking Kane and Clay. We set our eyes back to the ring where Mahal and Regal are out of the match. Tyson Kidd kicks Ezekiel Jackson and goes to eliminate the big man but Jackson simply grabs him and throws him over the rope. Heath Slater comes charging towards Jackson also but gets thrown out. It is now down to Ezekiel Jackson, Cody Rhodes and Justin Gabriel. Cody Rhodes and Justin Gabriel double team and get Jackson over the top rope it is now down to them 2. Cody Rhodes dominates Gabriel and hits him with a springboard kick to the face. Rhodes sets up Gabriel for the Cross Rhodes but out of nowhere Randy Ortons music and lighting comes on and Orton appears on the stage (payback for last week where Rhodes helped Barrett attack Orton). Orton leaves the stage, Gabriel throws the distracted Rhodes out. Justin Gabriel is new Intercontinental Champion!!. Commercial Up Next is Daniel Bryan v Christian
Daniel Bryan v Christian Daniel Bryan starts coming out to the ring but is jumped by Christian, Christian throws Bryan into the barracade and drags Bryan over to the ring steps, Christian puts his arm underneath the steel steps and grabs a chair from under the ring, Christian hits the Steel Steps as hard as he can crushing the arm of Daniel Bryan. Christian walks out of the arena with the chair as Daniel Bryan is in the hands of some trainers, we will get an update on his condition at the end of the night. We cut to Joey Styles who is interviewing Randy Orton.
Styles: Orton, tonight you have a contenders match against Wade Barrett but it seems like you are some what distracted by Cody Rhodes, ive gotta ask, will this affect your chances in tonights huge main event?
Randy Orton: Tonight its all about earning the right to face Sheamus for the World Title at Vengeance, If Rhodes thinks at all that im through with him he can think again, after i beat Wade Barrett tonight AND after i win the World Title, i will get my hands around Cody Rhodes neck and i will give him the beating he deserves. Commercial, CW Title Match up next
Cruiserweight Championship Match Yoshi Tatsu v Trent Baretta Yoshi Tatsu comes out firing with some lethal kicks to Baretta, Tatsu hits a snapmare and then hits a shining wizard for a 2 count. Tatsu goes to the top rope again but is interfered with by Trent Baretta, Baretta and Tatsu both fight on the top rope but both men fall off the top rope crashing to the floor below, both men make it back to the ring after a 9 count and they both exchange fists, Trent Baretta gets the upper hand and hits Tatsu with a big time jawbreaker, Baretta then hits an amazing dropsault on Tatsu but only for a 2 count. Baretta goes to the top rope and nails the cross body but again for a 2 count. Baretta grabs Tatsu and sets him up for the tornado ddt but Tatsu fends him off and hits him with The Rising Stun (kick combo to the temple) and gets the pinfall. Yoshi Tatsu helps Baretta up to his feet and shakes his hand but then attacks him, Tatsu continues the assault on Trent Baretta then leaves.
Sin Cara returns to Smackdown Next Week
We get an update on Daniel Bryan, He has suffered a fractured arm and will be out for a few months. Up next is the Main Event
Number 1 Contenders Match Wade Barrett v Randy Orton World Champion Sheamus is at the announce table doing some commentary work for this match. The Match starts and Orton gets the upper hand, Orton hits a huge poweslam and attempts the RKO early on Barrett but Barrett moves out of the way, Barrett runs towards Orton but Orton hits the back breaker and gets a near fall. Randy Orton throws Barrett out of the ring infront of Sheamus, Orton goes towards Barrett when he starts staring at Sheamus, Sheamus stands up from his chair but before things got physical Barrett hit Orton from behind, Wade Barrett throws Orton shoulder first into the steel steps. Barrett gets him in the ring and locks in an arm bar on the viper. Randy Orton struggles to break the hold but finally does and starts to hit Barrett with some stiff right hands. Orton comes off the ropes but Barrett counters it by nailing a devostating spinning side slam and gets another near fall. Wade Barrett lifts Orton up for the Waste Land but Orton wiggles out of it and hits another back breaker, Orton taunts and its time for the RKO, Orton is about to hit the RKO when he noticed Cody Rhodes coming through the crowd, Rhodes tries to charge to the ring but Sheamus notices and hits a massive brogue kick on Rhodes. Orton turns around and Barrett gets him up for another Wasteland and this time connects with it and Wade Barrett gets the 3. After the match Randy Orton got back up and attacked Barrett, Cody Rhodes gets back up but Orton runs after him and Rhodes gets the hell out of there while Orton chases after him. Wade Barrett gets up and Sheamus gets in the ring. The Show ends with Sheamus holding the world title infront of Wade Barrett.
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 26, 2011 22:49:11 GMT -5
World Heavyweight Championship Match Sheamus(c) v Wade Barrett United States Championship Match Dolph Ziggler(c) v Jack Swagger v John Morrison v Rey Mysterio *Card to be updated*
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Post by TC on Oct 27, 2011 14:37:53 GMT -5
I saw Gabriel winning as soon as I saw he was in the match, lol.
Sad to see Bryan is injured.
* Barreta, not Baretta. Nice match though.
Barrett 4 Champion.
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Post by AC on Oct 27, 2011 17:04:32 GMT -5
Not a bad smackdown man, kinda short though I thought. Vengeance is looking pretty good so far
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Post by Next Generation on Oct 27, 2011 21:32:20 GMT -5
I saw Gabriel winning as soon as I saw he was in the match, lol. Sad to see Bryan is injured. * Barreta, not Baretta. Nice match though. Barrett 4 Champion. Terrible at spelling lol. Thanks for the feedback guys, Raw is pretty much done ill post it on the weekend if not monday morning.
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