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Post by themrn on Sept 11, 2014 22:09:18 GMT -5
First micro in a long time. I thought I had an account here but apparently not. Hope you guys like it.
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Post by AC on Sept 11, 2014 23:54:50 GMT -5
I'm not sure if I've ever seen any of your work. A little rough, but it's nothing terrible. I would work more with the shading on the template overall.
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Post by Next Generation on Sept 12, 2014 1:35:18 GMT -5
I think it is pretty good man, keep going with these you always get better with time.
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Post by TC on Sept 12, 2014 9:06:54 GMT -5
I feel like I've seen your name around here before, but can't exactly remember any of your micros off the top of my head. Welcome back, though.
The shading on the shorts could be improved. Rather than just using one color for the creases try using more than one to give it some depth. Some more shading could be added around the waist of the shorts and the boots so they will flow better with the rest of the body, and not look so painted on. Not really feeling the head at all, but that's understandable since it's your first micro in a while. The faces are almost always the hardest part. I would try to stray away from making the eyebrows one straight line. The technique used on the eyes also throws it off a bit; makes them look kinda blurry that way. Try using some of the darker shades used on the skin tone to give it more of an outline.
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Post by themrn on Sept 12, 2014 16:39:34 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies! I used to do micros over at caws.ws. I was registered in another forum somewhere but yeah, havent done them in a while.
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Post by Hurricane on Sept 13, 2014 0:33:09 GMT -5
Been a Long time since a new microer showed up here. Not bad at all dude. There's definitely a lot of room for improvement, but nothing bad on it. Will have to see one or two more before I critique. Welcome to the boards.
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Post by Ermolli on Sept 13, 2014 16:54:28 GMT -5
It's not bad. I would like to see more from you. I feel like i've seen some of your micros before though over caws.ws.
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