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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 22, 2010 18:21:03 GMT -5
I've decided to scrap my old temp and start on a new more cartoony one. Any cc, on the abs pecs and neck is appreciated. None on the knees, as that was sketched in so it's not good. Same Rules apply and ENJOY!!!
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Post by Alex on Jan 22, 2010 19:04:31 GMT -5
Ive said it a couple times but, im not a huge fan of the oversized temps, but thats just me. I think the linework is awesome, the shading is good but could be upped a notch with its cartoony-ness, right now it looks like something you'd still see on a standard temp,
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 22, 2010 20:14:20 GMT -5
I understand cartoony, but does it have to be so big? The shading doesn't look cartoony at all either.
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 22, 2010 20:23:18 GMT -5
When I said cartoony, I meant more along the lines of proportions. I'm currently working on a resize which puts it around the size of a normal micro template.
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 23, 2010 15:51:00 GMT -5
It's around this size, reason it's all black is cause the shading inside is crap and I'm still working on it. Also working on the upper shoulder things as well. The lining on the outside is being worked on as well. Is the size good, or still too big. I don't want to go much smaller than this size though...
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Post by Alex on Jan 23, 2010 15:55:51 GMT -5
I think the size looks a lot better
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 23, 2010 18:55:09 GMT -5
Size is fine now.
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 23, 2010 20:17:29 GMT -5
Here's an update... The calves need some work, and I think I need to make the torso a tiny bit smaller, but I was going for a more cartoony like temp in terms of proportion. Same rules apply and feedback is always appreciated! Enjoy!!!
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 23, 2010 20:30:54 GMT -5
Leave the torso. Looks awesome.
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 23, 2010 20:31:27 GMT -5
You don't think the chest looks too big?
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Post by TC on Jan 23, 2010 20:48:45 GMT -5
This is sweet. Body reminds me of WWE's old Flex 'Em figures.
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 23, 2010 23:01:27 GMT -5
No, the chest looks fine, dude. As Tyler said, it looks like a FlexEm, which is cool.
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Post by waynev1 on Jan 24, 2010 6:53:44 GMT -5
This is looking awesome Mach, I like the shading you have nailed it really well, this should look great when it is done.
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 24, 2010 13:15:05 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I added a head, the shading on it still needs work. I have a question though, do you think I should add a fifth shade. I'm contemplating it, but I want to keep the shading simplistic, but I think a fifth shade that's a tiny bit darker than the lightest would help add some detail that I wouldn't be able to have with four shades. Thoughts? Opinions?
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Post by mach3gillette on Jan 24, 2010 15:06:44 GMT -5
Finished
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