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Post by Ermolli on May 25, 2011 19:27:33 GMT -5
Im working on a Y2J, and i wanted to work on the shaping and stuff, soo, this is a WIP. What do you guys think so far?
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Post by AC on May 25, 2011 20:07:07 GMT -5
The pose is great. It needs a little work on smoothing out the right arm so it's not so jagged on the out line and the shading on the torso and left forearm could use a little work. Overall though I think it'll be nice when its done. I like seeing people go outside the box with poses and do something original so congrats on that
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Post by the rising underdog on May 25, 2011 22:54:23 GMT -5
that look pretty darn good i really cant say much meaning that this is a wip but from what im seeing so far is great
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Post by Diablo. on May 28, 2011 10:15:45 GMT -5
Very, very original. I like it for the most part, but the pectoral that you have edited seems quite odd and the kneepads seem too far turned to one side in terms of their shaping and should be positioned more to the outer sides of the legs. Designs could also use some anti-aliasing, but I really, really like what you are doing with this micro.
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on May 28, 2011 10:20:59 GMT -5
Loving the attire so far. The head looks pretty good and I like that it is original. I don't like some parts of the definition though(abdomen, etc.) I think it looks kinda out of place. Good luck with finishing this and hopefully it turns out well.
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Post by Hurricane on May 28, 2011 18:35:29 GMT -5
I wish the head was straight forward, I dont like turned heads on micros. Pose is pretty good, but the shading could better smoothen it out. Attire designs are good, but colour is a little off and should be shinier.
Also, WIPS go in the board above this one.
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Post by Diablo. on May 28, 2011 21:22:02 GMT -5
Moved.
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