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Post by the rising underdog on Oct 18, 2009 3:57:57 GMT -5
here is my first real attempt at a anime charater so here is yuki from the seris Vampire knight i think theres a little problem with the eyes but i cant figure it out
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Post by Hurricane on Oct 18, 2009 4:55:19 GMT -5
Nose is HUGE and it looks like she has two black eyes. Attire is alright, hair is okay.
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Post by Alex on Oct 18, 2009 12:18:11 GMT -5
The hair and eyes do have that anime look to them, you just need to translate that style to the rest of the micro. The nose for example needs to be smaller, don’t overdo it with the shading or it will add to its size. The shirt also looks pretty good, the shading on the lower half is pretty basic and plain, and theres some instances where anti-aliasing would come in handy
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Post by the rising underdog on Oct 18, 2009 19:23:01 GMT -5
okay i fix a little bit the skirt i wil have to study more before i touch it
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Post by Alex on Oct 18, 2009 22:10:14 GMT -5
The nose and mouth look a lot better. Though these ones arent bad, I prefer the old eyes tbh, if im not wrong i think cane was referring to the black lines under her eyes originally.
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Post by the rising underdog on Oct 18, 2009 22:46:38 GMT -5
okay i will change that up now .... done
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Post by the rising underdog on Oct 19, 2009 18:50:58 GMT -5
is that better
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