AVCore
Backyarder
MS Cruiserweight Champion
Posts: 245
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Post by AVCore on Nov 20, 2009 10:08:04 GMT -5
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 20, 2009 17:17:25 GMT -5
Attire and everything looks pretty good. I'd say you differentiate the shades a bit more on the black area. The white and red stick out alot, so you should make the shades on the black further apart to keep the effect.
The wrist tape and white areas on the attire are too grey and dull. Lighten them up and as I said before, differentiate the shading more. The body is okay, but the shading is very boring. It seems like all the shading is just around the edges. You could make it so much more exciting. Check out micros by MJH, myself, Alex, etc. and see our bodies and how we make them look less plain. Head isn't bad at all, nice try at modding.
Solid micro overall.
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Post by Alex on Nov 21, 2009 13:42:59 GMT -5
Looks good overall, my main crit would be the body definition, it just needs to be more toned, both in shading and in lining. Right now it just looks kinda looks like he hasnt worked out since he won the medal in 96.
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