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Kane
Jan 6, 2010 14:02:47 GMT -5
Post by Masson on Jan 6, 2010 14:02:47 GMT -5
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Kane
Jan 6, 2010 14:14:01 GMT -5
Post by Alex on Jan 6, 2010 14:14:01 GMT -5
Good job on editing the body, he looks more accurate now that its less ripped, i would still do away with some of those vertical lines on the neck, its always bothered me about that temp.
Like i said the designs are good so far, mask is pretty well done, i think the "burnt" face looks a little too much like face paint, it should look a more blended, with some lighter patches of ash here and there. The regular face does have some resemblance, good work. Lastly i think the towel looks a bit too much like a wig or something, i think it has something to do with the way its shading, try making it look more like folds in fabric.
I think with a little more work on the shading these could really turn out great
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Kane
Jan 6, 2010 16:41:06 GMT -5
Post by the rising underdog on Jan 6, 2010 16:41:06 GMT -5
those are really good some of them look flat but you have a really good thing going on with these
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Kane
Jan 6, 2010 22:11:18 GMT -5
Post by Hurricane on Jan 6, 2010 22:11:18 GMT -5
Not bad at all! None of them are grade A amazing, but you're on your way! Keep trying to work hard, check out vets micros for tips on shading and listen to what everyone says. These are all pretty decent. Some things are a bit off, but you're doing well! Keep it up dude! Keep trying to get better!
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Kane
Jan 7, 2010 8:07:14 GMT -5
Post by Masson on Jan 7, 2010 8:07:14 GMT -5
Alright, I am definately going to work on these a little more, give an update later.
What is Vets Micros? Is it another micro board? Or is it a Person? or what?
Thanks
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Kane
Jan 7, 2010 11:54:08 GMT -5
Post by Alex on Jan 7, 2010 11:54:08 GMT -5
he just means veteran microers, as in people who have been doing it for a long time
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Kane
Jan 7, 2010 13:19:10 GMT -5
Post by Masson on Jan 7, 2010 13:19:10 GMT -5
Oh right, that makes sense.
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Kane
Jan 7, 2010 18:23:29 GMT -5
Post by Hurricane on Jan 7, 2010 18:23:29 GMT -5
Sorry, just my micro slang.
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