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Post by Masson on Jan 23, 2011 15:50:39 GMT -5
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Post by Diablo. on Jan 23, 2011 18:29:46 GMT -5
First thing I'd recommend you should work on is the skin colour. It looks very orange. Also, the arms need to be wider, they look very skinny.
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 23, 2011 21:29:33 GMT -5
The arms do not look skinny. Granted, theyd have to be bulked up for heavyweight wrestlers or whatever, but for an average person, they are fine. Template looks okay, not bad, nothing special.
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Post by Alex on Jan 23, 2011 23:10:17 GMT -5
I think you should try to make the darker shades blend with the lighter shades more. example around the collar area, try adding AA around these parts. Also AA around the outer lines of the arms would help the linework look less jagged.
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Post by Masson on Jan 24, 2011 13:23:14 GMT -5
Update, I've never been any good at leg shading, but I tried nonetheless.
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Post by TC on Jan 24, 2011 14:00:37 GMT -5
It isn't bad, but the shaping around the calf area looks really awkward.
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Post by AC on Jan 24, 2011 14:39:05 GMT -5
the calf shaping and shading looks really weird
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 24, 2011 19:08:43 GMT -5
Yeah agreed.
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Post by Masson on Jan 25, 2011 7:36:26 GMT -5
Another update. Used parts of the legs in Sauls old template (In fact, it's most of his legs) Also, The apple logo was just something I got bored and did, lol. I actually quite like the AA I did in it
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Post by TC on Jan 25, 2011 17:14:22 GMT -5
The update is much better.
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Post by Hurricane on Jan 25, 2011 20:30:23 GMT -5
Now that its shading, I actually do think the arms should be a LITTLE bit bulkier. Looking better though, the legs in the update are much better.
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Post by Masson on Jan 28, 2011 19:33:12 GMT -5
Micro I made with the temp. Anything about it (the temp) I need to change? Also, can you tell what te logo on the shirt id meant to be?
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Post by CMC on Jan 28, 2011 20:25:49 GMT -5
Eagles?
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Post by Masson on Jan 28, 2011 20:44:59 GMT -5
Yeah. I wasn't sure on how well I did it but at least someone can tell. I still need to touch it up a little tho.
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