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Post by Masson on Mar 24, 2011 7:43:43 GMT -5
I made this a while ago now, on a set of other Marvel Micros. Trying for a more simplistic costume design, trying not to overcomplicate it with the webbing over the red part.
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Post by uksix on Mar 24, 2011 9:55:41 GMT -5
I think the light shades on the blue make it alittle hard to see the definition, and the darkest is a tad to dark. The spider logo is done well, and it flows real good from blue to red. I just feel the legs are too long.
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Post by Masson on Mar 24, 2011 21:10:58 GMT -5
Ok, not entirely sure what you mean about the shades, I think you mean make the lightest shade darker and the darkest shade lighter? I'll work on the legs, too. Thanks
I meant to post this in the other micro board, but I posted it here by mistake, this was meant to be finished...
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Post by Alex on Mar 24, 2011 21:42:49 GMT -5
The designs of the costume look good but it overall seems a little flat. Theres not a whole lot to the shading besides anti-aliasing of lines. The "eyes" i feel could be improved, a lot of artists draw them large with thick black outlines and sharp points at the top. Also think the head should be slightly bigger
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Post by Hurricane on Mar 24, 2011 22:44:28 GMT -5
Legs are a bit too big and the head is a bit too small, as I've said before. Not bad, logo is good, but its a little basic without the webbing, plus the template isnt amazing for me.
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Post by CMC on Mar 25, 2011 0:48:00 GMT -5
I think even though you said you chose not to add them, the webbing could really make this pop.
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Post by haasamaniac on Mar 25, 2011 2:06:04 GMT -5
I really like this Masson. The forehead could be bigger though.
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Post by Masson on Mar 25, 2011 11:39:33 GMT -5
Ok, update is coming soon. I will be fixing the legs, and the head size. I will experiment with some webbing cross the design, and make some of the shading a bit more obvious.
About the eyes, the idea was to make it look like they go off the side of the head, but I guess that didn't work. I'll try tweaking them.
What's wrong with the template, Cane?
Update is up in the first post
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Post by Masson on Mar 26, 2011 20:19:15 GMT -5
Any comments on the update?
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Post by Hurricane on Mar 26, 2011 20:32:51 GMT -5
Well, I explained whats wrong with the template... the head/legs sizes. Update looks a lot better.
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Post by Diablo. on Mar 26, 2011 21:39:19 GMT -5
Looks really cool, Steve
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