The Triple-Six
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Post by The Triple-Six on Apr 17, 2011 19:45:33 GMT -5
--- I've been really into Bullet For My Valentine lately so I decided to give Matt Tuck a go... I kinda like it, but there's just something about it...
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Post by eclipse on Apr 17, 2011 20:55:53 GMT -5
Looks good, but IMO He's way more muscular here than in real life The only issue I have with how it looks, is that his face looks tiny :\
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Post by Hurricane on Apr 17, 2011 21:15:55 GMT -5
Face needs darker shading, to match it with arms. I'd also add darker shading on the shirt. Also, his chin is really square like, try to make it skinnier and more rounded. I love the hands and shoes, and the logo. The pants are great, but I don't like how the rips are nearly symmetrical.
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Post by The Triple-Six on Apr 18, 2011 6:19:43 GMT -5
Thanks guys, I'll be sure to work on those things later. I notced the jaw was too square and big while making it, but I never bothered with it lol. And I can see the rips being symmetrical, I'll do something with that. I'll have to work on how muscular he is too, since in reality he is a scrawny fuck xD
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Post by Alex on Apr 18, 2011 13:32:25 GMT -5
Yea like others have said, try slimming it down a bit, mainly the biceps and the neck. I'd also add eyebrows. But overall it is pretty well made dude. The proportions are really good and i know thats been a weak point of yours in the past. Shading is good throughout though it looks like you might have had some detail loss in the pants when uploading
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The Triple-Six
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Post by The Triple-Six on Apr 18, 2011 15:53:30 GMT -5
Thank you very much dude, that helped a bunch. Updated the first post, did just about everything on it
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Post by Hurricane on Apr 19, 2011 2:30:16 GMT -5
shouldve kept the old version next to it, I cant tell what you changed.
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Post by Diablo. on Apr 19, 2011 2:42:42 GMT -5
I really like it, especially the clothing.
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Post by The Triple-Six on Apr 19, 2011 21:00:20 GMT -5
Thank you Dean :-D Just put the old next to the updated, Josh.
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Post by Hurricane on Apr 19, 2011 23:30:58 GMT -5
I dont like the new arms. The vertical line going down his bicep is weird. Rather than take the shading off, I'd have simply brought the outline in to make them smaller. The chin looks just as wide as before, it's still very square. Eyes are better, but look slightly slanted and the shading style is still different to the rest of the body (head is more blended).
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Post by Masson on Apr 20, 2011 9:55:47 GMT -5
I dislike th hands, where the tip of the thumb looks as if it were attached to the rest of the hand. Other than that, it's pretty cool. I'm not seeing him at all in the face though, he looks way too old, imo.
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Post by Alex on Apr 20, 2011 22:25:15 GMT -5
Its an improvement but i would tone down the shaping of the biceps still, and remove the vertical line going down. I dont think you need the muscle tone from the original, makes him look too ripped. The slanty eye issue can be resolved by edittng or just getting rid of the row of shades 2 pixels down from the pupils. But the overall shape of the head/face looks better now
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