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Post by da on Nov 18, 2009 16:03:56 GMT -5
its for a match on another forum. C+C
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 18, 2009 18:28:33 GMT -5
Looks far too ripped. Looks like Baista. Face doesn't really look like him. Try to slow down and edit it and you'll get better over time. Attire is pretty good, though some shaping/shading is off (check out mine or Alex's tutorials). Also, wrist tape should have a black outline, since the rest is. Kickpads also look weird.
Not bad, better than your older micros in your sig. Just try to slow down, check out some tuts and some other people's micros for tips and try to produce your best work ever!
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Post by Alex on Nov 18, 2009 18:38:12 GMT -5
i agree, try not to get TOO attached to the temp, mod it a bit to match the physique of whoever your doing, might mean toning down some of the ripped muscles. also the boots or kick-pads kinda curve in on the inner leg on a very sharp angle, try toning that down a bit. Other than that it looks pretty good, you'll get the hang of it soon just keep practising
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Post by da on Nov 18, 2009 23:33:32 GMT -5
thanks for the comments guys can you give me a link to alex's tut
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 19, 2009 6:28:16 GMT -5
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