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Post by the rising underdog on Nov 23, 2009 18:33:42 GMT -5
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Post by Alex on Nov 23, 2009 21:55:28 GMT -5
Ehh not bad, though from a quick google image search it looks like the colours are off, also the boots and shorts look pillowy, hands look like deflated balloons, way to flat looking. From what i can tell the mask looks pretty good
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 23, 2009 23:19:04 GMT -5
You didn't change the shading at all. The shading is crap. Sorry, but it is. It's still pillowy, still flat and still boring.
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Post by the rising underdog on Nov 23, 2009 23:21:34 GMT -5
i tired what you said i really did the colors on the purple and the green are more seperating if you are awilling to show how it should be i will try harder
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 23, 2009 23:24:08 GMT -5
Okay I'll show you.
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Post by the rising underdog on Nov 24, 2009 15:46:53 GMT -5
i tired to fix the mask tone by adding more space i don't know if that what you were saying to do also i made new hands for him so they don't look like "balloons"
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 24, 2009 16:42:44 GMT -5
Still too many shades and too close together. I zoomed in on paint and there was heaps of shades that were pretty much the same, which makes it blurry. Make it 3 shades, including the base shade and make each one further apart.
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Post by the rising underdog on Nov 24, 2009 16:58:02 GMT -5
were should it be 3 tones because the mask is three tones
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Post by Hurricane on Nov 24, 2009 18:22:44 GMT -5
Mask is 4 tones in most areas. Still, dude. It's a decent micro, shaping is pretty good overall and its not bad by any means. Just slow down your next one, try to copy the shading as good as you can and try to make it less blurry.
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Post by the rising underdog on Nov 24, 2009 20:06:20 GMT -5
okay well then ended him ^_^ i do have another one that is done but i wont post that until tomorrow I'm working on some small hings with him but i will leave you with a teaser
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