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Post by eclipse on Dec 8, 2009 4:01:56 GMT -5
So, I'm just looking for your feedback on what's done so far (don't worry about the hands, I'll be fixing those before you even mention it) . And before you say it, yes she is "fat" (average 20 year old polish female build, actually) So anyway, what would you think I could improve on with this? I really want it to turn out good, so I'll try whatever you suggest, if I feel it would actually assist in the perfection of the piece.
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Post by mrn on Dec 8, 2009 17:06:26 GMT -5
Looking good! The lip looks kinda funny, and make the eyes equal if theyre not.
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Post by TC on Dec 8, 2009 17:11:17 GMT -5
Looks pretty good so far. Cant really critique much as im looking at this on my shitty lg vu. The neck does look a bit to skinny compared to the rest of it though. A reference picture would help me give more suggestions.
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Post by eclipse on Dec 8, 2009 17:53:14 GMT -5
Ah, sorry, there is no reference picture. It's all from my hands
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Post by Alex on Dec 8, 2009 18:28:58 GMT -5
Looks great so far, I do agree about the neck, maybe a pixel wider on each side. Another minor comment is the jaw looks a bit lopsided. Should be quite nice once its done
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Post by eclipse on Dec 8, 2009 18:31:30 GMT -5
Well, her head is tilted like one degree --> that way so..
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Post by Alex on Dec 8, 2009 18:35:18 GMT -5
still, i think the right side sticks out a little too much, and it looks a lot more round and full than the other side
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Post by eclipse on Dec 8, 2009 18:39:06 GMT -5
Her right, or our right? Because on our right, hair is over a lot more of her face than our left. And on her right, that side is faced more towards the viewer than the other side..so its bigger.
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Post by Hurricane on Dec 8, 2009 18:42:05 GMT -5
Her left (hers, not our left) jaw does look a bit big. It's really good so far though.
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Post by eclipse on Dec 8, 2009 18:44:14 GMT -5
It's probably from my shading but ok, I'll keep messing around with it and see what I can get. It's hard doing these things from scratch yknow
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