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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 17, 2009 9:11:11 GMT -5
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Post by mrn on Dec 17, 2009 12:45:09 GMT -5
White should be clearer imo, only thing i can think of now tbh.
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Post by AC on Dec 17, 2009 17:01:50 GMT -5
Well the face paint needs to be white and it would look a lot better. Everything looks good for now though except that
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Post by Hurricane on Dec 17, 2009 21:14:02 GMT -5
Face paint should be whiter and his head less round. Not bad so far.
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 18, 2009 6:55:57 GMT -5
Ok Imma do those. I need tips for shading this. Got any?
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 18, 2009 8:21:11 GMT -5
Update with jacket. Again I need help on shading the attire. Please help me
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Post by Alex on Dec 18, 2009 12:59:21 GMT -5
The jacket is from a template im pretty sure, and it doesnt really flow well with the rest of the micro IMO. The shading is different, the shaping isnt totally accurate to his, and the colour is too light. Also the bat's shaping widens out too much at the top
I do like the face though, the expression w the mouth really makes it look like him. Nice touch
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Post by Hurricane on Dec 18, 2009 18:52:04 GMT -5
Yeah, I hate the jacket. It's shaded different and looks like theres heaps of wind blowing it up. You also need to add the designs to the attire.
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 18, 2009 21:37:22 GMT -5
Sorry if you hate the jacket And yeah I will put designs.
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Post by Hurricane on Dec 19, 2009 4:53:19 GMT -5
It just wrecks the flow of the micro. I'm guessing its a template? I think you should use one without it.
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 19, 2009 11:10:25 GMT -5
Nah. I give up on this, no more updates... Sorry for disappointing you with a mediocre work
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Post by TC on Dec 19, 2009 12:54:06 GMT -5
I honestly don't see why you give up on it. That head is fucking awesome. You could just remove the jacket and add designs and you'll have yourself a kickass micro.
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 19, 2009 13:01:00 GMT -5
Yeah sorry but this is for a match and the deadline has been reached. I also tried a go at the designs and it failed. Again, sorry...
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Post by Alex on Dec 19, 2009 16:31:35 GMT -5
Even if its passed the deadline you should continue working on it, it has a lot of potential and theres not THAT much work left to be done on it
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Dec 20, 2009 0:39:28 GMT -5
What should I work on anyway?
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