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CenaWIP
Dec 23, 2009 10:47:51 GMT -5
Post by MoNjA. on Dec 23, 2009 10:47:51 GMT -5
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CenaWIP
Dec 27, 2009 18:30:04 GMT -5
Post by Hurricane on Dec 27, 2009 18:30:04 GMT -5
I like it so far. The eyebrows should be a pixel or two longer. Possibly also give him a smirk on one side of his mouth. Does look great so far, though.
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CenaWIP
Dec 28, 2009 0:42:34 GMT -5
Post by MoNjA. on Dec 28, 2009 0:42:34 GMT -5
Here's an update I added a smirk on his face but it didn't look good so I took it out.
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CenaWIP
Dec 28, 2009 1:54:01 GMT -5
Post by Alex on Dec 28, 2009 1:54:01 GMT -5
That looks a lot better, only thing i'd say to change would be make the ears stick out a little more like they do on your previous one
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CenaWIP
Dec 28, 2009 3:07:42 GMT -5
Post by MoNjA. on Dec 28, 2009 3:07:42 GMT -5
Thanks and here's a new update
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CenaWIP
Dec 28, 2009 4:35:16 GMT -5
Post by Hurricane on Dec 28, 2009 4:35:16 GMT -5
The legs are way too short and he looks way too wide. He looks like steroid-taking midget right now. Head isn't bad, but I prefer the last update before you posted the body.
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CenaWIP
Dec 29, 2009 3:31:52 GMT -5
Post by MoNjA. on Dec 29, 2009 3:31:52 GMT -5
Update
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CenaWIP
Dec 29, 2009 4:39:28 GMT -5
Post by Hurricane on Dec 29, 2009 4:39:28 GMT -5
I edited it on the right to show you what needs fixing. You can use it if you want to keep going. I made the arms skinnier and more muscular, made the bottom of the pants wider, changed the legs up, added definition to the torso and worked the head a little bit. You also use way too many shades that do nothing. It's a stage I went through too. Try to use four significantly different shades rather than 10 that are slightly different here and there. It will make things flow more and look less pillowy.
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CenaWIP
Dec 29, 2009 6:46:53 GMT -5
Post by waynev1 on Dec 29, 2009 6:46:53 GMT -5
I like it, the head is ok could use some work in some places really but i still quite like it, and I like it how Hurricane and modded it, you should try and follow the way hurricane has done it becuase i think you will turn out to be one hell of a micro maker if you stick to what people tell you and show you. nice job overall.
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CenaWIP
Dec 29, 2009 13:16:04 GMT -5
Post by Alex on Dec 29, 2009 13:16:04 GMT -5
For the arms, I would stick with something closer to the second body upate, since Cena's got those huge fuckin gorilla arms, maybe make the forearms a little longer though, like a pixel or 2. I agree with the changes to the legs, and the shades is your call, but i think it will make things easier if you trimmed some of the more unnecessary shades
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