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Post by the rising underdog on Feb 15, 2010 2:22:14 GMT -5
here is the most favorite micro of mine to date the madd hatter i have 2 faces because i couldnt decide with look was better
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Post by waynev1 on Feb 15, 2010 3:31:01 GMT -5
Nice job Dave I like this one a lot better compare to the first one you did! the shading will still need some work but in my opinion once again I think you are getting a lot better, so nice job and keep it all up.
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Post by Alex on Feb 16, 2010 11:03:45 GMT -5
Its better than the last one but could still use some work. The second face doesn’t suit the character so I don’t really know why its there. Try bringing out the pink cheek makeup he has a little more. Hair could also be a tiny bit more vibrant orange.
I still feel the outfit is a letdown, it just looks too plain and ordinary for the character. His shirt is missing a checkered pattern, the white sleeves poke out from under the jacket sleeves a lot more than your showing, and the pants just don’t look right. His pants aren’t as baggy and flare out more at the bottom, also they should be pin-stiped. Also the back of the jacket should be showing between his legs
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Post by Hurricane on Feb 16, 2010 17:16:54 GMT -5
Not bad at all. The hat is missing alot of details. The face paint should be white, not grey. The cheeks should be more indented and the smile a bit more goofy. Finally, the pink should be more noticeable around the eyes. Oh, and the hair slightly brighter. Attire is extremely disappointing. As Alex said, it's too plain, but its also innaccurate. The pants should be striped, the boots are wrong and the tie should be brighter. Missing alot of details, too. The shading overall is bad. Once again, its a good start, but it looks unfinished.
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Post by the rising underdog on Feb 17, 2010 0:22:48 GMT -5
well the stripe pants i could understand i never saw the stripes on his pants the picture i used didnt show them well enough
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Post by Hurricane on Feb 17, 2010 0:32:34 GMT -5
what about the rest?
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Post by the rising underdog on Feb 17, 2010 0:45:30 GMT -5
common mess ups lol
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Post by Hurricane on Feb 17, 2010 5:47:16 GMT -5
Haha. Well if you go back and take your time to make the edits work, I can definitely see this being a micro we'll remember.
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