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Post by Famous. on Apr 7, 2010 19:03:21 GMT -5
I decided upon making a Kick-Ass project, which will basically just consist of Kick Ass, Red Mist, Big Daddy, and Hit Girl. To start off, here is a WIP of the man himself... OLD UPDATE  C+C? |
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Post by Diablo. on Apr 7, 2010 19:06:52 GMT -5
Looks okay I guess, but everything just looks painted on.
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Post by Famous. on Apr 7, 2010 19:08:03 GMT -5
So, how could I make it better? I asked for C+C, not C.
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Post by Alex on Apr 7, 2010 19:09:12 GMT -5
Pretty good for the most part, I think the body could be a bit slimmer since from what I understand he’s a teen, and not a very built one. The gloves shading doesn’t stand out much, and the shaping of them should stick out from the body suit, like its fitting over it, same with the boots, right now they look like they’re part of the tights
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Post by Diablo. on Apr 7, 2010 19:10:08 GMT -5
C&C is Comments and Critisism (i think)
Comment: Looks okay
Critisism: Looks painted on.
But yea, give it a bit more texture and maybe make the boots come out by a pixel or something.
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Post by Famous. on Apr 7, 2010 19:10:46 GMT -5
Hmm, yeah, how would you suggest I go about that? I've tried just making them a pixel larger, but it just looks wrong... <_<
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Post by Alex on Apr 7, 2010 19:16:30 GMT -5
here's a quick edit, for the shaping, the shading i would still suggest contrasting more  |
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Post by Famous. on Apr 7, 2010 19:43:07 GMT -5
Yeah, you have done a better job than I did, also, Dean, I was always under the impression C+C was Constructive Criticsism, but you're probably right, otherwise why is there a "+"  Anyway, thanks guys, I may work on this tomorrow, pretty tired atm. |
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Post by Hurricane on Apr 7, 2010 21:19:22 GMT -5
CC is constructive criticism. C+C is comments/criticism.
I like it, but the gloves need darker shading. Overall its a solid micro, though.
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Post by mrn on Apr 9, 2010 17:20:18 GMT -5
It needs AA
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Post by Diablo. on Apr 9, 2010 22:09:34 GMT -5
Of course. Everyone needs Attitude Adjusted.  |
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Post by Attitude Adjusted on Apr 10, 2010 7:47:20 GMT -5
Of course. Everyone needs Attitude Adjusted. Not again... |
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Post by Famous. on Apr 10, 2010 7:50:56 GMT -5
It has AA.
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Post by Diablo. on Apr 10, 2010 8:56:12 GMT -5
It needs MORE anti-aliasing. By this, I mean so it doesnt look like jagged edges anymore  |
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